Fallout: The Untold Adventures

Hey guys this is my first time writing a story tell me what you think and if should continue

Angel is a young girl. She has lived in a vault her whole life, or at least she did until her father left the vault. I should slow down, Vault 101 was always secure and people were nice to each other. You and your father lived in the vault your whole lives and knew there was a world outside but didn't know what was out there. In the vault people helped each other, there was plenty of food and water, you had friends. You have none of this outside... unfortuneitly Angel did not know this.

"Happy Birthday Angel!" everybody said
Angel smiled as she went to her 16 birthday party. All her friends were there, her dad, and some other people from the vault. People talked to her, hugged her, and she laughed at the boys at her party. Angel was beautiful, she had long, wavy blonde hair C cup tits, long slender frame and a smile that makes all guys go hard. She has never had sex yet but she does masturbate regularly, she loves the image of a guy or girl touching her breasts and pussy. She also knew exactly how to manipulate boys in to doing almost anything. She was thinking of the time with John in the bathroom with the other boy when she got snapped back to reality from her best friend Amy.
"What are you thinking about?"
"nothing come on"
She made her way to her dad to thank him for her birthday and she went around collecting gifts and cards and stuff like that barely listening.
"Hey Amy why haven't you given me a present yet?"
"Oh i will just wait till tonight come over to my place at 8"
Angel thought it was weird but didn't question it as she went back to her party. She ate her cake and went home to shower. At 7"30 she left to go to Amy's house.
"Bye dad im going to Amy's"
"don't do anything bad"
Angel loved to wear cut shorts. It showed off her ass amazingly and she loved to have guys(even girls) stare at it as she walked by. She also wore a very low cut shirt that exposes maybe a little too much cleavage but she didn't care she just like to taunt all the boys knowing she can have anyone she wants.Angel walked her way down to the main part of the vault when she was intercepted by 3 guys she knew very well. Tom, Adam, and Fred. Angel cursed to herself as her three stalkers stopped her.
"well well well what kind of meat have we got here?" Adam asked
"MMM damn you look tasty, you better watch yourself down here little girl don't want anything bad to happen now do we?" Tom asked as he stared at her.
"Fuck off guys" Angel said
"Hey you cant dress like that ...

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